u should really have thought about making the NTR avoideble from the start. bad move on ur part dev. so many will not play this game with NTR in it. including me. and u did not warn people about the NTR in the tags, another bad move
Hello!
Thanks for your feedback, we have already added a button in the options to disable future HTR content in the game.
(Patch will be out in a few days)
At the moment the game DOES NOT have Ntr scenes.
The closest scene similar to NTR belongs to the Voyeurism tag.
And in the next patch, even she can be avoided too.
I gave this a quick try after seeing the rather negative (and a bit rude) review, here are my own thoughts:
-I really like the art work. It and the medieval aesthetic feel like they blend in nice for the choice of setting.
-Lovemaking scenes: In general, these are too short and lack depth. I'll forgive the first one, as its a dream, but in general, sex starts, progresses, and ends. The scenes don't feel like they end (or really start), they just start, and then move on to the next. Usually, sex is something that comes down after a relationship is established and things are discovered, and chemistry fizzles. Or it's a transaction, but even then, the action of it can show and convey the personality of each partner. These scenes don't really do that. It's a chapter 1, but comparing to other visual novels who have done early sex approaches, it's definitely a weakness.
-I notice the world is entered by the MC via VR, but I feel like I would just have it be taken place in the fantasy world without the need to set it. Obviously though, that's more of a subjective criticism.
-I don't really care about the wording of "range of romantic possibilities", but MarloweC has a point about sexuality. If you intend to offer different sexuality options, I would make it configurable from the start.
-I'd use the word "demo" over chapter 1, as chapter 1 is far too short for a chapter, but if this is your first visual novel, I applaud you for getting this far. It's hard work! I think if you give the relationships more substance, give a bit more tender love and care to the sex scenes, and add a bit more to the starting player experience, I can see it having potential.
The thing is, this is just the first chapter of the whole story. In the future, we plan to release updates with further plot development. Therefore, in this early version of the game, you can only witness the beginnings of the plot.
Stats exist in our game, but they are hidden from the user. New characters (including men and others), romance routes, and more will be introduced in future updates.
We also plan to conclude the game with multiple endings based on player choices.
It's not even a chapter. You literally cannot do the first quest because it isn't implemented yet,but you still are forced to progress past it without being able to do it. Then you go to the next day and there are no possible actions. You just wander around doing nothing because there is nothing to do.
Also, you've already demonstrated at the beginning that the MC is attracted to women with no choice and there is zero indication of the MC having the ability to be attracted to men. Why the fuck would you add male romance later after proving that it it's a continuity error? Like, have you ever written anything before? You have no concept of plot.
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i will support this game is ntr is continued n the game
Бедный папа не успел уйти за сигаретами пришлось сдать Миранде надеюсь Миранда оценит
Очень качественная демка ,гарем входит в планы?
Спасибо!
Да, гарем входит в планы как только сюжет позволит его ввести в игру.
Is it possible to avoid netorare, that is, not to happen at all?
Hi, so far in the first update it cannot be avoided, but we will fix it in the next patch
u should really have thought about making the NTR avoideble from the start. bad move on ur part dev. so many will not play this game with NTR in it. including me. and u did not warn people about the NTR in the tags, another bad move
itch has a netorare tag, no?
love the game and ntr
I gave this a quick try after seeing the rather negative (and a bit rude) review, here are my own thoughts:
-I really like the art work. It and the medieval aesthetic feel like they blend in nice for the choice of setting.
-Lovemaking scenes: In general, these are too short and lack depth. I'll forgive the first one, as its a dream, but in general, sex starts, progresses, and ends. The scenes don't feel like they end (or really start), they just start, and then move on to the next. Usually, sex is something that comes down after a relationship is established and things are discovered, and chemistry fizzles. Or it's a transaction, but even then, the action of it can show and convey the personality of each partner. These scenes don't really do that. It's a chapter 1, but comparing to other visual novels who have done early sex approaches, it's definitely a weakness.
-I notice the world is entered by the MC via VR, but I feel like I would just have it be taken place in the fantasy world without the need to set it. Obviously though, that's more of a subjective criticism.
-I don't really care about the wording of "range of romantic possibilities", but MarloweC has a point about sexuality. If you intend to offer different sexuality options, I would make it configurable from the start.
-I'd use the word "demo" over chapter 1, as chapter 1 is far too short for a chapter, but if this is your first visual novel, I applaud you for getting this far. It's hard work! I think if you give the relationships more substance, give a bit more tender love and care to the sex scenes, and add a bit more to the starting player experience, I can see it having potential.
Thanks for the feedback!
We agree with your comments and will make changes in the next update.
Ok, there is something seriously wrong with you.
False. The story makes no fucking sense. It is full of plot holes.
False. There are almost no decisions and no stats, and the story is extremely linear despite being free roam.
False. They are all women.
Ok, true, this is subjective, but I don't like the art at all.
False. There are zero endings. The game railroads you into a softlock.
Thank you for your feedback!
The thing is, this is just the first chapter of the whole story. In the future, we plan to release updates with further plot development. Therefore, in this early version of the game, you can only witness the beginnings of the plot.
Stats exist in our game, but they are hidden from the user. New characters (including men and others), romance routes, and more will be introduced in future updates.
We also plan to conclude the game with multiple endings based on player choices.
It's not even a chapter. You literally cannot do the first quest because it isn't implemented yet, but you still are forced to progress past it without being able to do it. Then you go to the next day and there are no possible actions. You just wander around doing nothing because there is nothing to do.
Also, you've already demonstrated at the beginning that the MC is attracted to women with no choice and there is zero indication of the MC having the ability to be attracted to men. Why the fuck would you add male romance later after proving that it it's a continuity error? Like, have you ever written anything before? You have no concept of plot.
Bro made a good attempt at ripping the author a new one, must've gone passed the
"Upcoming Features of LustfulPath:"
then proceeded to list out said features that aren't implemented yet and tried to critique them like they were lol fucking idiot
You're the idiot. It didn't say Upcoming. There's a thing called editing a post.